A resume can either open doors or keep them closed. The head of manufacturing
for an Ohio-based industrial products maker discovered this firsthand when he
sought to make a job change last winter. He updated his resume in January and
then contacted recruiters, answered Internet postings and started networking.
By April, his efforts had resulted in only two informal networking meetings.
A friend urged him to revise his resume by
strengthening his
summary and
emphasizing his accomplishments.
The revised resume began opening doors for him. He was invited to interview
at several companies, and three pursued him aggressively with job offers. His
top choice was a manufacturer located only six miles from his home, where he's
now manufacturing manager just two months after sending the company his revised
resume.
What's the Problem?
Job hunters often ask what's wrong with their
resumes. They've toiled to write a document that seems airtight to them. They've
fretted and sweated over every detail, ranging from the substantive to the
cosmetic:
- Does my resume grab the reader?
- Are my accomplishments displayed prominently enough?
- Could my wording have more impact?
- Have I adequately presented my skills and abilities?
- Is there enough white space?
While these are valid concerns, there's a greater issue. Never assume that
people are going to read your resume because the fact is that most resumes get
only a passing glance. You must do everything possible to spark immediate
interest during that moment.
Says Jerry Gallegos, vice president of marketing at Western Wireless in
Bellevue, Wash.: "I give each [resume] five, 10, maybe 15 seconds. What I'm
looking for is how good someone is -- what they've done. The sooner I see this,
the more interested I am in giving the resume a thorough read."
Constructing a resume that earns interviews is remarkably simple. Here are
six do's and don'ts to follow when composing your document.
1. Begin with a summary.
Showcase two or three of your most exciting accomplishments. Bullet these
items and use numbers to illustrate their extent.
It isn't compelling enough to say, "Grew territory revenues," or even, "Grew
territory revenues in excess of corporate goal." What really hits home is
saying, "Grew territory revenues 25% in less than 6 months," or, even better,
"Grew territory revenues 25% in less than 6 months versus goal of 15%."
By starting out this way, you'll be showing people how good you are,
not just telling them that you're good. As a plus, you'll distinguish yourself
from job seekers who begin by listing their functional specialties and a brief
discussion of their strengths.
2. Use a chronological format.
The next section of your resume relates to your experience. Always list your
experience in reverse chronological order, starting with your most recent job.
Employers and recruiters dislike resumes that follow a "functional" format,
where experience is cited by job function, such as sales, marketing or public
relations.
Organizing your resume functionally is a major gaffe --
tantamount to committing job-search suicide. Many employers and recruiters won't
read this type of presentation because they can't tell when and where an
experience has occurred.
"My clients and I need to know when somebody did something and at which
company, especially what they did in the last five years," says Dave Gillespie,
principal of D. Gillespie & Associates, an executive-search firm in Broomall,
Pa. "Because this critical information isn't available in functional resumes, I
usually don't read them."
3. Tailor your resume to the job you're seeking.
More can be done to strengthen your candidacy within the chronological
format.
Because the goal of your resume is to gain interviews for a particular
position, always cite your activities in order of their importance to that job.
Omit information that's unrelated. The less you say about your unrelated
experience, the more impact the related activities will have.
If you're seeking two or three different positions, prepare two or three
separate resumes, each tailored to the job you're after.
4. Focus on your accomplishments.
Next, discuss your accomplishments, not your responsibilities. Recruiters and
prospective employers are primarily interested in the value you've brought to
your past employers. Most important are improvements you made and their benefit
to the department or organization, especially in increasing revenues or reducing
costs.
To identify your most important accomplishments, follow the advice offered by
Martin John Yate in "Resumes That Knock 'Em Dead" (Adams Media Corp., 2003). Ask yourself, "What did I do that I'm most proud of?" and "What did I do
that I want other people to know about?"
Always look for opportunities to show how you exceeded expectations,
outperformed peers, or excelled during adverse conditions, such as during a
tough economic period, aggressive campaigns by competitors or unique company
setbacks - for instance, the loss of a large customer.
"I'm not impressed by an accomplishment unless it's put into perspective by
showing how the applicant did something that was truly noteworthy," says Robert
Kaminsky, president of Folex Imaging in Fairfield, N.J. "For example, anyone can
sell an exciting new product that's being supported by a massive national
advertising campaign. But to exceed corporate plan or grow business during an
industry contraction -- that makes me want to meet the person."
Don't save the most exciting thing you did for last. Job hunters who do this
-- and many do -- erroneously believe they are telling a compelling story that
leads up to a dramatic climax. Instead, begin the discussion about your
experience at an employer with that climactic statement. If you don't, your
story may never get told.
5. Use descriptive verbs.
Describe your experiences in phrases that start with a past-tense action
word. Bullet each item. Bullets and verbs in the past tense produce statements
that are more vivid and illustrative. These verbs are particularly effective:
- directed, led, managed, supervised;
- achieved, delivered, drove, generated, grew, increased, initiated,
instituted and launched;
- cut, decreased, reduced, slashed;
- accelerated, created, developed, established, implemented, instituted,
performed, pioneered, planned, produced, re-engineered, restructured, saved
and transformed.
6. Make your resume inviting to read.
After deciding on what you want to say about yourself, be sure your resume
has sufficient white space. The top and bottom margins should be at least a
half-inch long, and the left and right margins should measure at least
seven-tenths of an inch wide. Insert white space between your section headings,
names of employers, job titles and discussions about your experience. Use
bold-faced type for section headings, employer names and job titles. If
the document lacks eye appeal, few people will review it.
Now, the Don'ts
What you shouldn't do when writing a resume is nearly as important as what
you should do.
1. Don't organize your resume by accomplishments.
Listing a string of accomplishments on the first page of your resume presents
the same problems for employers as the functional resume format. If you want to
showcase your accomplishments, use the introductory summary.
2. Don't use the same words to begin sentences or use the words "I" and "my."
Make your writing fresh and exciting by varying the verbs that begin each
statement. Omit "I" and "my" because they can make you seem weak and immature.
3. Avoid clichés.
Don't describe yourself as "dynamic," "people-oriented," "results-oriented"
or "self-motivated," or state what a great "out-of-the-box thinker," "hands-on
leader" or "visionary" you are. These clichés lack originality and typecast you
as a follower instead of a leader.
4. Don't use underlining or italics to add emphasis.
These devices cheapen a resume's appearance. Additionally, some computer
scanners can't read underlined or italicized copy.
5. Avoid using a fancy font to gain readers' attention.
Fancy fonts aren't inviting to read, and many people discard resumes that use
them. Play it safe by choosing Arial, Garamond, Helvetica, Tahoma or Times
Roman.
6. Don't state the reasons for your job changes.
Explaining why you've changed jobs seems defensive or indicates that you
think you have a troubled work history.